Thursday, 21 March 2013

Passive or Active

Active:
Big Brother is watching you.
Passive:
You're being watched by Big Brother.

Active:
Mr Wayman was teaching the 3rd form.
Passive:
The 3rd form were being taught by Mr Wayman

Active:
I am sorry for what has happened.
Passive: 
For what has happened, I am sorry.

Active: 
Orwell is obeying his rules
Passive: 
The rules are being obeyed by Orwell.


Breaking Orwells Rules


Big Brother is watching you.

Translated by Breaking all 5 rules:

You know that Big Brother surveys no light at the end of the tunnel.


Original:
The music from the telescreen had stopped.


Translated by Breaking all 5 rules:

He noticed that the atrocious drone given out form the godforsaken telescreen had ceased to exist leaving him into a gargantuan mood of relaxed armistice.

Reflection:

Orwell was suspicious of language that broke his five rule. It would seem, from our examples, that when sentences or statements are broken down, that they begin to lose their meaning and become less direct and to-the-point. This is not only used in literature but in modern day polotics today as a way of easing the blame through the passive voice. Orwell five rules do not only give structure and meaning to a sentence, but they make it stand out by being boiled down. This is why Orwell is suspicious of language breaking his five rules

Orwell's Rules for Writing


1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to
seeing in print.

2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.

3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.

4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.

5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of
an everyday English equivalent.

6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

Monday, 18 March 2013

How Orwell’s literature has influenced the Modern World.


The Article describes how America doublethink in the White House about Drone Wars.

This article describes what the Americans want to hear and Iraq.

3. Double Think / Orwellian
This Article describes the increasing danger of Philippines reporter deaths.

4. Orwellian-

This article describes how a Catholic leader has accused David Cameron on his approach to gay marriage.

5. Orwellian-

This article describes Nick Clegg view on domestic violence.




Orwell’s 1984 continues to reverberate in modern culture, decades after it was first written. A clear example of this is Orwell’s creation of the word Doublethink. Doublethink is used a great deal in modern day society such as in News, Blogs and Tweets. The word Doublethink has been increasingly used in America especially by the Politicians as either a demonstration of someone using it or in the practicing of doublethink. Another example of an Orwellian word is Telescreen this features much more in modern society than me may realise. Either camera, GPS tracking systems on our phones or the Internet, are constantly surveying us. This leads us to believe that we are not a free as we may be led to believe is. Is this the practice of doublethink? Another term stemming from Orwell is the word Orwellian features a great deal in British Politics and has been used as a criticism of either being old fashioned or a totalitarian government. This is how George Orwell's 1984 continues to appear in modern society.

Friday, 8 March 2013

Part 1 Conclusion

WAR IS PEACE
FREEDOM IS SLAVERY
IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH


By the end of part one, the reader has been introduced to Orwell's horrifying dystopia. We have learnt how a party can dominate its own people and how it can contradict its past to correct and alter in its favour. For example Orwell states that ’Who controls the past,’ ran the Party slogan, ’controls the future: who controls the present controls the past.’ And yet the past, though of its nature alterable, never had been altered.  By controlling the past it means that Big Brother can never be wrong and therefore can tell its people how much better the world that they are living in is more of a Utopia than what most don't realise is horrific Dystopia. The party has removed the freedom of their people. They have done this by controlling their thoughts by introducing 'thoughtcrime' and 'telescreens' that monitor peoples every moment and are introducing a new language called 'newspeak' which aims to prevent the way that people express their feelings, for if you cannot explain an expression then how can you show it, this; therefore, will inevitably prevent rebellion.

Analysis of an Extract

Summarise this extract in your own words.
This extract displays the critical situation that the people are living in and how they are forced to accept this. They are forced to believe lies from the government demonstrating its absolute power over its people.

Where precisely does this extract occur?
This extract occurs when Winston, Syme and Parsons are talking during lunch about Winston’s previous encounter with Parsons children where he was accused of being a traitor.


The Extract:

'Comrades!' cried an eager youthful voice. 'Attention, comrades! We have glorious news for you. We have won the battle for production! Returns now completed of the output of all classes of consumption goods show that the standard of living has risen by no less than 20 per cent over the past year. All over Oceania this morning there were irrepressible spontaneous demonstrations when workers marched out of factories and offices and paraded through the streets with banners voicing their gratitude to Big Brother for the new, happy life which his wise leadership has bestowed upon us. Here are some of the completed figures. Foodstuffs-'

The phrase 'our new, happy life' recurred several times. It had been a favourite of late with the Ministry of Plenty. Parsons, his attention caught by the trumpet call, sat listening with a sort of gaping solemnity, a sort of edified boredom. He could not follow the figures, but he was aware that they were in some way a cause for satisfaction. He had lugged out a huge and filthy pipe which was already half full of charred tobacco. With the tobacco ration at 100 grammes a week it was seldom possible to fill a pipe to the top. Winston was smoking a Victory Cigarette which he held carefully horizontal. The new ration did not start till tomorrow and he had only four cigarettes left. For the moment he had shut his ears to the remoter noises and was listening to the stuff that streamed out of the telescreen. It appeared that there had even been demonstrations to thank Big Brother for raising the chocolate ration to twenty grammes a week. And only yesterday, he reflected, it had been announced that the ration was to be reduced to twenty grammes a week. Was it possible that they could swallow that, after only twenty-four hours? Yes, they swallowed it. Parsons swallowed it easily, with the stupidity of an animal. The eyeless creature at the other table swallowed it fanatically, passionately, with a furious desire to track down, denounce, and vaporize anyone who should suggest that last week the ration had been thirty grammes. Syme, too-in some more complex way, involving doublethink, Syme swallowed it. Was he, then, alone in the possession of a memory?

The fabulous statistics continued to pour out of the telescreen. As compared with last year there was more food, more clothes, more houses, more furniture, more cooking-pots, more fuel, more ships, more helicopters, more books, more babies -- more of everything except disease, crime, and insanity. Year by year and minute by minute, everybody and everything was whizzing rapidly upwards. As Syme had done earlier Winston had taken up his spoon and was dabbling in the pale-coloured gravy that dribbled across the table, drawing a long streak of it out into a pattern. He meditated resentfully on the physical texture of life. Had it always been like this? Had food always tasted like this? He looked round the canteen. A low-ceilinged, crowded room, its walls grimy from the contact of innumerable bodies; battered metal tables and chairs, placed so close together that you sat with elbows touching; bent spoons, dented trays, coarse white mugs; all surfaces greasy, grime in every crack; and a sourish, composite smell of bad gin and bad coffee and metallic stew and dirty clothes. Always in your stomach and in your skin there was a sort of protest, a feeling that you had been cheated of something that you had a right to. It was true that he had no memories of anything greatly different. In any time that he could accurately remember, there had never been quite enough to eat, one had never had socks or underclothes that were not full of holes, furniture had always been battered and rickety, rooms underheated, tube trains crowded, houses falling to pieces, bread dark-coloured, tea a rarity, coffee filthy-tasting, cigarettes insufficient -- nothing cheap and plentiful except synthetic gin. And though, of course, it grew worse as one's body aged, was it not a sign that this was not the natural order of things, if one's heart sickened at the discomfort and dirt and scarcity, the interminable winters, the stickiness of one's socks, the lifts that never worked, the cold water, the gritty soap, the cigarettes that came to pieces, the food with its strange evil tastes? Why should one feel it to be intolerable unless one had some kind of ancestral memory that things had once been different?

He looked round the canteen again. Nearly everyone was ugly, and would still have been ugly even if dressed otherwise than in the uniform blue overalls. On the far side of the room, sitting at a table alone, a small, curiously beetle-like man was drinking a cup of coffee, his little eyes darting suspicious glances from side to side. How easy it was, thought Winston, if you did not look about you, to believe that the physical type set up by the Party as an ideal-tall muscular youths and deep-bosomed maidens, blond-haired, vital, sunburnt, carefree - existed and even predominated. Actually, so far as he could judge, the majority of people in Airstrip One were small, dark, and ill-favoured. It was curious how that beetle-like type proliferated in the Ministries: little dumpy men, growing stout very early in life, with short legs, swift scuttling movements, and fat inscrutable faces with very small eyes. It was the type that seemed to flourish best under the dominion of the Party.

Julia's Perspective

I know we are doing something dangerous. We first crossed paths during Hate Week. I had instantly known by his look that he was the same as me, carried the same hatred as me and wanted the same destruction of the party as me. After learning how to conceal you feelings you can recognise it instantly. When Goldtein appeared on the telescreen during Hate Week I noticed the muffled agreement that we both held. It was far to dangerous to let my expressions get the better of me, so I had to continue to play the parties ideal, the swine, the real criminal. After this experience I noticed a glimpse of determination hidden beneath his expressions and I knew that would have to arrange a meeting...
Our next encounter happened when I followed him down in to Prole territory, a steamer flew overhead. I panicked but had to soon control my emotions. Would he be alright? Was he even still alive? This was when I knew that there was something different about him and how I needed to be with him. Behind that old face was a determination a desire to rebel, well cloaked during the regime of Big Brother. I didn't care if I got vaporised I had to be with him, I would find a way to meet him no matter what the consequences.

Word Collapser:
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Monday, 25 February 2013

Reading Routine

Reading Routine for 1984:



Ch.
pages
Sample activities
Part 1
1
3 – 22
Week 1
1.     Setting up blog: site for journal and all classwork / preps
2.     What do we know about Nineteen Eighty-Four today?
3.     Starting to read
4.     Characterisation
5.     Orwell’s use of language to create setting

2
22 – 31

3
31 -39

4
40 – 50

5
51 – 66

6
66 – 72

7
72 – 84
Week 2
1.     Updating blog
2.     Analysis of a key paragraph: style
3.     Reader’s expectations
4.     Manuscript studies
5.     Totalitarian regimes

8
85 – 107
Part 2
1
111 – 123

2
123 – 133

3
133 – 143

4
143 – 154

5
154 – 163

6
164 – 167
Week 3
1.     Updating blog
2.     ‘A Capsule in Time’ tie-in: dystopian fiction

7
167 – 174

8
174 – 186

9
186 – 227

10
227 – 234
Part 3
1
237 – 251

2
251 – 273
Week 4
1.     Updating blog
2.     Reviews: character, plot, moral
3.     Pastiche / transformative response
4.     Archive: Orwell at Wellington
5.     Present blogs

3
273 – 287

4
287 – 295

5
295 – 300

6
300 – 311
Appendix

312 - 326